Immigrants come to this country for a better life . people in this country don't have freedom. I don't feel free because i can't do what i want. i am sharing my thoughts because a lot of people think that they are free    

i don't think that people in this country are free . I think and example is that if people don't finish school they can't get a good job . For example people in this country get paid more money if they finish school. Another example of limited freedom in this country is that more black people go to jail for the same same things white people do. For example more then 50% of black people that don't finish high school go to jail.

 One of the good things in this country is that there that all people get a chance to get an education. i don't like this country because this is a lot of people that don't like other people because of there color. Another bad thing about this country is that people in this country like to use a lot of gas in thing to hurt this Earth. By sharing my thought i hope that people in this world will change the way they do thing to help this world. Even though not everyone has freedom. In some places in this world people run low on food  

I think not to have freedom is not to have a life where you can do anything you want .I think people should have freedom because it not fair that people can't do want they want. i think that not every person in this world has freedom because some  people don't have family. I am writing this vision of freedom because people think that there other people are free in this country.

the most important right is the right to be free. i think that another right a person should have is the right to live with .  People need people to live with because in the story there was a kid that lived in the street by himself and got sick. I think that another thing that a person need to be free is to get all there shots . In the story i girl could not walk because she  didn't get he shot and people started to make fun of her . I hope that every person in the world see my vision of freedom. i think that no one is free in this world   

Jesus book 3 2007

I perfer David live because he gets to eat meat and play games watch movie.For example is that David gets to go on the computer for as log as he wants .Another example is that David gets to eat food from cooks.The last example is that David gets to go sking with his friends.Clearly thats why I perfer David lifestyle

I don't perfer Wendy lifestyle because she live on a boat For example Wendy can't get to listin to music too long or stay on the computer.Another example is is that wendy lose all her friends .The last example is that they can't eat meatbecause they don't have a fridge . Clearly that why i perfer David's life over Wendy's life

Reading essay

The problem with the young man is that he cant see elephants . for example he told the old man that he can't see elephants . another example is that the young man can only see tigers. The last example is that he ask the old man to help him. Clearly the young boy can't see elephants

The problem is resolved when the young man can see tigers. For example the young man see a tiger i stones. Another example is that the young man tells the old man that he can't see elephants but he can see tigers.the last example is that the young man learned to see elephants . Clearly The problem is resolved when the young man can see tigers

what would most like happen is that the young man will be a good artist. For example the young man learned from the old man.Another example is that the young boy toke lesson to be come an artist .the last example is that the young boy could see tiger just like the old man can see elephants. clearly that the reason i think that the young boy will become a artist.

There is a problem that this country is facing. the problem is that pencils and papers are making it boring for kids because teacher are always using laptops in front of us kids and using the laptops are going to make it fun for kids . I urge that your make all the school in the country use laptops to make more school fun so more kids can come to school everyday .

Pencils and papers are making it boring for kids its boring because it hurt when the kids write plus it make kids tried because you look in side of a paper all day and in the laptops you look in and do your work faster than what you would if you have have a paper and a pencils .

This is also bad because than the school will make us kids feel like we are not anything in the school because we watch the teacher use laptops everyday and they always rush us to finish are work and with laptops it would be as the teacher tell us and then we finish faster than the time that was given to finish our work in .

The laptops are going to make it fun because kids will be happy and they won't go to sleep in class because it will be fun because kids will get to go on games that would help them with where games and in they own a computer at home are a laptop that they can use they can go on the games and play and get smarter than what they would if they had not played the website on the laptops

I urge that you make all school in the content have laptops so they can get smarter faster from Jesus Castillo in school 339 thank you and a hope you make a change

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September 19,2008

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Intro-blogs:

My name is Jesus.I go to school it c.i.s. 339. My Ela teacher is mr.Spevack. What i like the most about my ela class is that i get to go on the laptops. we are going to be blogging about what we do i reading My goals for sixth grade are to pass my class in school I plan on accomplishing my goal by reading for every day and by turn in all my homework .It in important to get good grade in reading and writing because if your good you can get i good job . Ihe genre of books i like to read is Mystery and I also like funnie books . The book i`m reading right know is called . what